12/12/2006

This is a redrawn strip.


I made a huge mistake originally in this strip, which I fixed in the redrawing for this collection. Originally, Tom was wearing glasses and wasn't going to show up again for several dozen strips, which is probably why I made the mistake. When I started Factor of 01, I wrote down some simple rules for the future of Jet-Pack Jenny. One of those rules was very simple, no one would be wearing eyeglasses. The idea with that is that LASIK-style surgery would be more commonplace to the point of being a standard procedure that almost everyone would get. This doesn't rule out someone wearing glasses, but they would need to be more remote or a very rare circumstance.

12/03/2006

Another redrawing, primarily on this one just to get the lettering and the proportions consistent. I was perfectly happy with the drawing itself, although there were a few changes made to the wall in front of the house. Of course, looking at this now, I see I forgot a window. Well, hello, Photoshop! Now no one will ever know.

What? I told everyone?

Dangit.

11/05/2006

This is a redrawn strip. Originally, there were sound effects, but after seeing it without them, I like it better. What do you think?

02/19/2006

Redrawn strip, which loses the split panel and necessitates a new strip be inserted before this to make up for missing dialog, so I'm sorry if it's a little confusing for a few weeks. There are cameos here, still. See if you can spot the Next Men and one of the Doctors.

02/12/2006

I'm hoping that when I do this for the new lettering , I can get across how far advanced the bluetooth looking cell phone Jenny has is.

01/29/2006

This is the latest, and hopefully, the last redraw. Ione looks much better in the second panel. I wasn't entirely happy with Jenny in the first panel, so I redrew it and did a little Photoshop pasting. Look for this strip to be colored soon. That's right, I've decided to go with color.

In the second panel, "new girlfriend" is not meant to imply (or is it infer?) that Jenny was Ione's husband's old girlfriend. However, I do reserve the right to revisit that and make it part of the backstory.

01/22/2006

You wouldn't believe the number of times I've redrawn a version of this strip. Once I redrew it in a very naturalistic, rendered and shaded style. Once I redrew it twice as tall, with an extra intro to show some of the city.

UPDATE (01/28/2012): I redrew this one more time, but a lot of it was tracing as it's proportions were wrong for eventually collecting the story into print format. The lettering in this strip is now consistent as well.